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My Tomorrow

Dreams of tomorrow come true
I can't wait for today to end
It's just too horrible
For me

Visions of a better day
Of when things'll go my way
Seem so far
Seem so far away

Come on tomorrow
I wish you were here
To take away
Take away all this pain

Come on tomorrow
Take it all away
But asking for that
Is like hoping for rain

Visions of better days
Of when things'll go my way
Seem so far
Out of reach

Dreams of a better life
Far away from here
Please come now
Please come soon

Come on tomorrow
You're so far away
Come now
Come today

Come on today
Come to an end
Can't stand you no more
No longer can pretend

Hoping for tomorrow
Come on sunrise
Bring a new life
Put stars in my eyes

Dreams of tomorrow come true
With my vision of a better day
But asking for that
Is like asking, for rain

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Written June 30th, 2005

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  • darkwolf14
    July 26, 2005
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    i like it


  • loveisbittersweet
    July 2, 2005
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    "But asking for that
    Is like asking, for rain" i loved that line.

    thanks for entering my contest and good luck!