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What the....?

we hung out for a while
and you said you loved me
i didn't accept it
and so we went our seperate ways

you still liked me
but left me alone
you went out with other girls
and i stayed by myself

your eyes hardened
and my prescence ruined your day
your hate ebbed through me
and i always return favors

so yesterday you were looking at me
and there wasn't hate in your eyes
i have no idea what's going on
what the heck is up with you?

Author notes

This is really starting to bug me... WHAT IS UP WITH HIM?????
*twitches*
So, okay, I think his contacts were bugging him, but it still creeped me out anyways.
Written June 30th, 2005

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  • AlyssaEngaged
    July 3, 2005
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    AWWWW THIS IS SOOOO CUTE i love it..keep up the great work and let me know what happens!!!!!!!!!

  • miSSareY
    June 30, 2005
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    oooooh. CONTROVERSY.


  • -YourAngel-
    June 30, 2005
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    I like the story this poem tells