You take.the words
Right out of my soul
They never seem to be the right ones though
-no offense
you make me write horribly
its amazing.
You twist me inside out
So I forget how to rhyme
And my creativity dwindles
- just inside your eyes.
I can’t put in words
The way my heart beats when you’re around
The way I can feel you in every inch of my body
I can’t tell you - with just a couple stanzas
How you get me all tongue tied
And make me giggle at awkward moments
… I feel like such a kid.
I just can’t use words
These nonsensical
Deliberate
Attempts
At rhyming and piecing together feelings
To tell the world
How much I really love you.
-Teresa- 6-30-05
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There is so much I want to say, but my heart just won't let me.
Written June 30th, 2005
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simply amazing
Yet another great poem by Teresa. 10 thumbs up. Great job. -
Teresa,
I do agree. This poem is very good. And I enjoyed it too. You are an amazing writer. And you spoke your soul in this poem. GREAT!
God Bless
~Ashley~ -
Teresa, this poem is really very good! I really enjoyed it. I hope you continue writing, because you have a real natural talent. I wish I could write free style like this... but no... all my junk has to rhyme... lol.
Well, take great care.
Richy
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