My hero has fallen from the heavens
An angel of darkness
Yet he protects me from my fears
I sit here in the silence of the moonlight
Longing to see him again
As shadows dance across the twilight sky
What is this felling deep with in me
When I’m alone it grows
How can I possibly let him know my feelings
Black feathers begin to float inside
Surrounding me in an embrace
He has come back for me
I shy away, trying to hide my tears
His strong hands take up mine
Words refuse to escape my lips
Gently smiling, he holds me close
Reality and time stand completely still
As he whispers that he loves me too
Author notes
was originally going to be titled 'black feathered hero' but i thought the title was too long.
and i got part of my inspiration from reading D·N·Angel.
the other part came from the upgrading of my emotions program.
i now admit to having feelings for a particular person.
scary, huh?
yeah...i thought so too.
yeah, my 'hero' is a friend of mine.
has an character named Lawrence Friday. and thats that.
^_^
Written April 3rd, 2005
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well darn. i would have enjoyed reading ur piece.
i think its fun reading similar pieces, cause its amusing to see how 2 different ppl attempt to tell roughly the same thing.
well, to make up for that...
im just going to go visit ur poetry now.
^_^ thnx, i appreciate ur comment! -
This is really pretty, and deep at the same time.. I wrote something similar to this when I was around thirteen... So, I wasn't happy with it, and I think I burnt it.. But, oh well. ._. You did a great job with this, and I hope things between yourself and your 'hero' remain good for many days and years to come. =)
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well, actually.
i drew a picture that sorta goes along w. this...
but i havent scanned it to the comp yet.
so yeah, for now...the hero is just in writting. -
Very different and like the idea for this poem, written well and has great emotion. good job, keep writing.
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wow! i like it. it's beautifully written and i think the
title fits right along perfectly. i like how you refer to
the black feathered hero. great peice of work
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