Our giggles skip across the water
Our bare feet slipping through the caramel colored sand
Only the breaking of the waves to calm the mood
Then we stop to admire the breathtaking view
Then, with one swift motion we dart toward the water
Laughing and screaming all the way
When we reach the water it sends goose bumps up and down my spine
But he quickly rubs them away
He takes me in his arms and we stand there with the wave’s crashing around us
And this time I hope
I hope he will never let go.
Author notes
i wish this could have happened at the beach when i went!..
Written June 29th, 2005
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Awww...That was beautiful....I cried.
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Awhh.
That would be amazing if that happened.
Cause you really deserve it.
But being single in the summer is good, hah.
That's the way I will be staying =)
-X's ♥ O's-
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Awhh.
That would be amazing if that happened.
Cause you really deserve it.
But being single in the summer is good, hah.
That's the way I will be staying =)
-X's n O's-
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"i wish this could have happened at the beach when i went!.."
well if i was there maybe it would have. lol. another good poem you have here. i guess i'll have to read more.
Arthur Is Dead
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thankx for your comment! and no actually i dont have a guy that i like(right now) but if i did this is one of many things i would hope to happen!and i am possitive that you will find sombody! just be yourself dont try to be sombody your not becauwe then you will get girls that arnt on the same level as you. So be yourself and you should have NO problems! you maybe could even writeher a poem!lol that would be the sweetest thing if a guy did that for me! anyways..lol...thankx for the comment! ~*CASEY*~
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Great.
oooooo. so you have someone you like. that is great. and your poem is great too. i was happy reading it. i can only hope that a girl feels the same way about me one day. -
that was so so good babe..i loved it..especially this part:
Our giggles skip across the water
Our bare feet slipping through the caramel colored sand
and:
When we reach the water it sends goose bumps up and down my spine
But he quickly rubs them away
great job!
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thankx gurl i know what you mean about the real world! i guess becasue it seems so easy for them to just walk away they would just rather do that! but thankx! hope to talk to ya soon! ~*CASEY*~
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this is good boo... this happend to me last summer... it was wonderful.. i hope you get to expierence something like this.. and have him keep you when you get back to "the real world".. cuz he didnt want me once we got back to reality.. well anyway.lol.. great job...xoxo stac
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thankx! yea well i lost my top last year to! so tell your friend she isnt alone!lol i was so imbarassed! plus to make it worse ther were two hotties standing about 5 feet away! that sucked so bad! but yes this trip was better! thankx again! ~*CASEY*~
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This is really pretty. Its very discriptive, and I can feel... um, the feeling. Last time I went to the beach my friend lost her top. This character in your poem seems to have a much better time. Good job!
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