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Confusion

I gave you what
You hinted at or seemed
To have wanted
You never once told me

How am I supposed to know
What it is you want
When I have to guesss
What those things are?

You know that I will
Do anything that you ask me to
But all I need from you
Is to let me know what those things are

All I am concerned with
Is your joy and happiness
Baby I love you
But I cannot stand this

I know how you must
Feel toward me and
My decision about us
But I went with how I thought you felt

Now look at us
Becoming enemies and no words spoken
You and your cold heart
Have left me to rot and heartbroken

So I am moving on
I don't think that we'll work anymore
The way you treat me
You make me feel like a worthless whore

No matter whsat you say or do
I will always be here for you
I will be here
Whether we're a couple or not

I want things to go to the past
Before December...
So we can go back to the good times
So I can look back and remember

Forget the fights...
And the rediculous breakups
The tear-filled restless nights
Of my thoughts and love for you

Our love has been poisoned
I need an antidote
So I can live a long joyful life...
My antidote is you...

*~I miss you~*


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Written May 12th, 2005

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  • scintillescence
    June 29, 2005
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    This is so sad , I'm sorry about your break up. You do express your emotions very well in poetry. I like the last stanza, the antidote metaphor, that's creative. Wonderfully written and best wishes
    -Iridescent