Things were said
that shouldn't have been,
i messed up
and now i've seen,
that how i felt
was over the top
and i can see
that i've been a cock
But that was then,
now things have changed
our relations
are re-arranged.
The past is done
its over, gone,
lets look to the future
and just have fun.
You said it yourself
i'd be your perfect friend
lets please move on
and try to mend,
the damage i've done
i've upset you i know
but the truth is i'm sorry
i just want it to show
Author notes
My ex-girlfriend read an old poem about when i was struggling to get over her and she thinks that i've been nice to her face and bitching behind her back. That poem was written over a month ago and a lot has changed, now i'm okay with everything and i just want us to get on. I just hope that she reads this so she can see i do want us to forgive and forget so that we can be friends.
Written June 29th, 2005
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I hope she reads it too. A guy who apoligizes is a lot greater then a lot.
I thought this was a good piece, nicely and simply rhymed to get your message across.
My only complaint is the lack of proper punctuation. The word "I" should always be capitalized, for one. -
awww this is really sweet! aww! A really good write, it made sense and flowed well. well done and keep writing
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That is sweet. I love sorry poems I don't know why they just are sweet!
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good
Nice sentiment Johnny.
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