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A simple song I wish to sing
A simple gift I wish to bring

A certain song of senserity
A certain song of clearity

I my heart I was confused
Though I kept it all subdued
So far away I stand
In this strange and distant land
If one can say how much they care
Than I would chance to take that dare
If I could be there
Then I would share
How much I care
Understand I put Him before
Though sometimes my heart still tore
I wanted to remain pure
But with that I had a hard time to endure
But with you, you put Him first
And don't make me feel like I'm cursed
I don't know the future, but where I stand is clear
Though at times I fear
I still wonder why
But I think now I will be able to look you in the eye

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Written June 29th, 2005

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