Silence settles in the air,
So quiet my heart beats in my ears,
Her breath tickles my nose
As she peacefully sleeps,
I trace my fingers across her
gentle features,
She looks so beautiful with
her hair strewn across my pillow,
The familiar smell of her
eases my senses,
The angel of my heart.
<3
One part of me in a dream state,
One part aware of his warm breath
on my neck,
As he strokes my cheek,
I absorb his sweet touch,
It seeps down into
my soul and heals my
inner being,
Open my eyes to find the
love of my life,
The angel of my heart.
<3
With our eyes only,
We dance,
No words are needed,
The music of this intense love
is all that is heard,
His ocean of blue sweeps
my mind up,
Her soft brown eyes holding me
in a reassuring grasp,
That moment we knew
this was forever,
As we danced.
Author notes
This has two points of veiw...
a magical moment in my life
I love you baby
Written June 28th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest For Love Poems! by XWingsOfSilverX.
350 points, ended July 22, 2005, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is great! I love the swithing from one point of veiw to another! Wonderfully written! Keep it up!
-Amanda -
this is a wonderful poem of unadorned love beautifully penned from the fire of love's unleased desire fabulous write here
love an dlight
blaze
P.S. I have written two pens for a child of a very very very dear friend who was born on 4-19-05 as Autumn Raine
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YAY!! I really like you peom its really creative and nice! Hmmm... good lucky in the contest love ya
xoxoxoxo
Edited on Jul 05, 6:51 p.m. because 'i'm dumb and i made mistakes lol'. -
Repeat the word beautiful cause it is - its just loaded with love and it goes to show love poems are the fire that breaks the ice over a cold heart anyday....awsome job
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how sweet is love
Lovely poem , deep and light in the same stroke , a sweet little gem of a poem ..lovely imagery , love so perfect here .
good luck ..this is really good . -
this is a great poem I loved it. It was very beautiful. Good luck and thank you very much for entering my contest.
Always,
Brat
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awwwwwwwwww thats a beautiful poem, ur such a brilliant writer Mercy, love ya
Tom -
thats GORGEOUS!!! the word are SO beautiful!!! I love that SO much!!!!
<333
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..that is beautiful....i like how you go from the guys to the girls and then both of them...it is..magical..amazing!!! the connection of two souls....beautiful...I love how you are so descriptive on both parts, both the maes and the females..you can feel love comingout of this...amazing..great job!! I'll haveto look further into your work...wow...great job!
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