Kneel before me and show me your devotion,
I'll place you upon a pedestal in my heart.
Serve me with joy and happiness always
And I will be always grateful for you.
Take pleasure in the pain I administer,
You will forever be my treasured slave.
Savor the pleasure I pour onto you,
Entreating me and my evil desires.
Power given freely from your soul to mine
Strengthens the bond that you and I share.
Welcome my pet to the whole of my world;
You have offered, I have fully received.
Now let us dance pain's dance,
and revel in the exchange of power.
Author notes
This piece was a writing activity for the group: The Fetish Shoppe. We were to switch roles (I am submissive) and then write a poem from that view. This is hopefully a Dominant's view of the lifestyle.
Written June 28th, 2005
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this is a wonderful write and this is how it should be there is something about the power exchange that excites me greatly, well done your writing is truly inspiring xx Cheryl
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this is close as a Dom I can see some of the true nature of it in this write. I will say that as a true D/s relationship strickly on its own pain and pleasure has a thin line and only can be seen by the sub thus it should be revealed and then respected and honored by the Master again you get to the heart of a very misconcepted lifestyle a true Master worships and honors his sub for true power of dominace comes emotionally and mentally not physically well done hun
love and light
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short and to the point. this was a fun read and I enjoyed it very much. hope to read more soon. keep up the great work.



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