what is love without faith?
just two lovers coming undone by space
what can grow from empty air?
only silence-which screams with truth
what can be seen in the dark?
just secrets with layers upon layers of protection
what qualifies something worthy of your breath?
maybe words that try to make up for your regrets
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Written June 28th, 2005
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Hey! I loved this poem! It's short, but very deep and thought provoking. I love a good poem like this that makes you think. You did a really great job! I love how you asked questions. You left the answers up to us. You made us think and wonder and ponder. It was really good. Most applaudable!
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i too red this several time...
And I agree
The are many levels to this piece.
Each read of it take me deeper.
Wonderful write -
Great
VERY deep... I love this... has far more meaning than most people would catch... the question is do you as the writer know how many levels of a persons psyche you could touch with this work? You may have more here than even you realize.... great job... hope to see more from you... -
this is an interesting line of thought. had to read it through a couple of times to bring understanding, though it still lies elusive in my brain. kinda sad and rings of truth, but i feel like it needs something more. still, an interesting read. ~ iof ~
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