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New Love Rhyme

Soft as an easy chair,
Warm as a summer's day,
New love is so cliche,
Where roses choke the air.

A drumming heart knows
how fresh love is savored
and special moments favored;
How quickly new love grows.

Dreams of decadence and lace,
Enamoured kisses and stolen smiles,
Completely ignoring daily trials
Sworn no other love could replace.

New, each and every time,
Even in re-polished love,
Mirrored in the sky above;
Taste new love in a rhyme.

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Commented on 'No One Needs It' by Gosh I Love You
Written June 28th, 2005

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