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Sweeter Then Wine

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I have tasted love as sweet as wine
felt the sensations of Satan's desires
hungered for lips full of pleasure
I have been burnt by passions fire

My life was filled with sleepless nights
losing all sense of reality in my mind
tear soaked pillows from broken dreams
the heartbreak of you leaving me behind

The sweetness of love turning so sour
as bitterness crept in and took hold
being faithful let's you play the fool
as love returned is untruthful and cold

Time heals the wounds as life moves on
true love would not be in my destiny
you play the cards life has dealt you
learn to fold them, it's not meant to be

I have taken control of my life through God
heartache and pain no longer dwell within
my Salvation has been my only salvation
I know a love sweeter then wine once again

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Written June 28th, 2005

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  • once again, well done! i enjoyed this read

    mylee

  • Ruby Petal
    June 29, 2005
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    Great

    I like this poem!! Its beautifully written and the lines r nice and sweet!!
    I hav u on my favs cause i lyk 2 red ure poems and I think they r good!!

    MaryAnn

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 29, 2005
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    Ah!!! Thank you so very much Di for leaving a nice comment. I shall read the rest of your series later. I have been busy. God Bless you my friend. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 29, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. It is so appreciated. You are very encouraging, thank you for that. God Bless. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 29, 2005
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    Thank you so much Mia Donna, This was a wonderful comment. You always make me smile. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy

  • luckynsincere gold member
    June 28, 2005
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    Sandy.. this was great... I love the way you describe how powerful your love with God is! It can take the place of any need or want you have. What a wonderful point you have made here! A piece of advice I need to take into consideration myself.
    Loves and hugs,
    Melanie

  • Ladybug
    June 28, 2005
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    oh Sandy I did need the verse so today for I have tasted the bittersweet of Satan and his temtation of desire of agony in defeat in relying on dissapoinment in lies and deceit....
    Only God and only God can give me that pure innocent wine I crave so deep that no man on this plane can touch or fill the desire of that inner quincing desire of love.
    thank you darlin once again for giving me back my reality
    My Stan in no more for the alcholic I married is now in jail for killing the man that put on brakes to my car out of bitter rage and jealousy some people will go to all ends to kill a simple innocent kind jesture of neighborhood friendliness.


    pray for me Sis
    I do need it today like never before please

  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    June 28, 2005
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    Sandy, mny friend, this was a very strong and powerful poem! very well written! I love it !
    Di

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 28, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Your words are so encouraging. I so appreciate your interest.My life has been a mess up until I met God and put my faith in him instead of man. Thank you for the lovely comment. God Bless you. Sandy

  • GirlNextDoor
    June 28, 2005
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    Masterpiece

    U deserve a standing ovation from me!! This is soo amazing. I wish i could find a love like that one u found. I keep seeking for it but as soon as i have it i loose it, get scared of how great it is and step away. . . I suffer a lot because of it, i know he is there but still, i feel soo alone. . . U are beautiful writer, so pure, so gentle, so full of emotions.Thanks.

    Lots of hugs and kisses GND
  • Mia Donna
    June 28, 2005
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    Very strong. Wow. And your last line was so sweet! Very nice job.
  • res23
    June 28, 2005
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    Awesome!

    It's great that you have turned to the Salvation of God to solve your problems. He can fix anything in your life and he will never break your heart, what a deal! God is the only person in life that you can ever truely trust. It's just so great to here of a person that puts there life in God's hands. Let Him control your life and you can never go wrong. Congratulations!
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