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Letting Go

I guess this is goodbye
I can finally let go
Give up or die trying
Too far from death
Too far from chance
So give up
I will weep for you
For I am weary holding it in
And I cannot
But no longer
Will I fall to this
No longer will I wish for what
Was
But I have moved on
And I will fly on broken wings
I don't know if it's better
Or not
But in the long run
I guess
I guess I should thank you

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Written June 28th, 2005

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  • miSSareY
    June 29, 2005
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    nice and simple.
    i like the uncertainty, but the strength also in this poem.
    kinda different from you, but i like it alot


  • tazzy5
    June 28, 2005
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    wow this is such a beautiful poem it's very inspiriational that you for sharing this poem with everyone here