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I'm Tiring

Silver silence
On a single thread
I can't hold in and
My hand slips
I let go into the
Blackness of what was once
My heart
Only to grab yet another
String of Hope
I cannot climb
And I will not fall
But I can't hold on
For fear of dying here
Alone and weak

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Written June 28th, 2005

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