there it goes - my last chance for peace.
i hear and comprehend the burning desire of the song,
creeping silently
through my skin and up my spine,
the icy fingers of the sleep coming down,
down upon my weak body, pale with hunger.
but my mind is strong, alert.
the thought of your skin, your blush,
your taste
gives way to my heart,
and through my haze of twilight,
my dreams of you pass through
through to the realm of consciousness,
and i fall into the dark oblivion of my mind.
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Written June 28th, 2005
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wow this is a really good poem i really like it great write
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I love you Mikey
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good job. it is about time that you posted something again. your welcome for the points, btw. tty soon.
love ya,
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woohoo! i'm the first to comment..i think... welp... i had an awesome time w/ u today..i miss you already! i'll e-mail you back when i get the chance! xoxo ~Anna~
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mikey, bout time you wrote something. i've missed your work a lot. you always have descriptive work, and a lot of imagry that always makes me feel what you say. another fine job my dear friend.
-Meg
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