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Destiny


  My eyes see reality
  My ears hear the truth
  I touch what’s really there
  And take in all that has
  Been truly spoken.
  But before it gets there
  In my mind,
  It jumbles up with
  My hopes, my dreams,
  And my deepest wishes.
  Although I know all that
    Really happens,
  I want it to be not so.
  I may hear it but I don’t listen.
  I may see but I don’t observe.
  I may know but I don’t realize.
  I block out the truth and
  Replace it with what I long for.
  Maybe I’m blocking the path for others
  But I’m paving a road
  To fate and destiny.


-Susan Dwinchick

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Written February 10th, 1998

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  • meena krish
    March 29, 2006
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    A very hopeful poem that shows determination..that no matter who says what on you go..well done with this write.
    Thank you for your entry..and good luck to you.
    Take care~