Have I seen you in my dreams?
a vision of your face that seems,
to only appear when I least expect
a lovely image of beauty so perfect.
Have I felt you deep within my soul?
sensations of your touch win me whole.
The emotional heart tickles in depth
a tranqul soul so perfect.
Do you feel me in your heart dear?
Can I hold you in my arms so near?
Take away the sorrow or pain
teach you how to love again.
Do you remember when we met?
By the beach as the sunset.
First glance said you were the one
my life with you has just begun.
Do you feel my love for you is true?
make me always adore your view.
Every thought of you makes me shiver
we're inseperable like water in a river.
Shall we sail the sea of life together?
Ride the storms in all kinds of weather
watch the sunrise over the mountains,
see the stars twinkling in the heavens.
Author notes
1st and 4th stanza by jennifer
2nd and 5th stanza by eternalpoet
3rd and 6th stanza by angelica
Written June 28th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Final round for select people.. by Janice M Pickett.
300 points, ended June 29, 2005, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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vision oftrue love!
The poem by the grand trio at A.P......Angelica,jennifer and eternalpoet, is really like a song of love!Shall we sail the sea of life together?
Ride the storms in all kinds of weather
watch the sunrise over the mountains,
see the stars twinkling in the heavens. " The concluding stanza consolidates the warmth o love!
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Thank you darling Gypsy, it was a fun contest to do, a very unique one that i really enjoyed, with my other two collaberators.
Love Joan
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OMG! What a perfect collab. I had no idea until I saw the author's note. This really wove well together, it's seamless. You guys did a fantastic job here! The piece is so very beautiful, wonderful imagery and the most elegant wording. A defiante winner in my eyes! I love this! Best of luck to you all. Blessings, Gypsy
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Dear Bea,
I've resumed commenting again after completing my Wagner "Ring of the Nibelungs" epic and this is the next on my list. Sorry I've missed you in the last few days but know you understand.
I congratulate the three of you on the perfect fusion of styles in your poem. If it weren't for your Author's note
one would never guess that the poem wasn't written by a single author. So I see what you've been up to while I've been immersed in gods, giants and dwarfs!!! Applause.
Good luck with the awards.
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh. -
Joan, Eternalpoet and Jennifer this is wonderful. The three of you together did a wonderful job on it. I absolutely love it from beginning to end, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Deke -
excellent
You achieved what I wanted from you. I felt a pull towards the people I chose. Although a few changes occured, The final result was absolutely amazing. Thanksyou so much. Brilliant poem and worthy of honour. -
Lovely Collaboration
Collaboration poems are a nice way to have a spiritual meeting of souls headed for the same common end while playing among the lines along the way.
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This is a beautiful colaboration...the lines meld together as if one heart wrote it. Fabulous job...best wishes in the contest.
Sam
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smooth flow of recall of love!
Oh! very beautiful recall of love divine! It is so nice appears like a continous stream of words and it is not like a collaboration! very nice!
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