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I Want Love

I want to have someone to hold me in there arms.
I want to have someone to tell me they love me.
I want to have someone to kiss every night.
I want to have someone call me when they miss me.
I want to have someone who thinks of me day and night.
I want love.

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Written June 28th, 2005

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  • July 2, 2005
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    hey this is a good poem..i like it! great write..
    ~~Jessica~~

  • BartholemewJ
    June 28, 2005
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    Excellent

    I can really relate to this. Perfectly written, and to the point. Well done!