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The Stranger

As the snow came falling down
Like a memory half forgotten
There she was
Beautiful and intriguing
And there she came
As though I knew her all of my life.
But I didn’t know her at all.
Who was she?
She smiled…
But I didn’t know that many woman
At least not personally
She spoke quietly
Come and find out what life is all about.
I came
And we had many adventures.
She made my life whole.
Ever since then I haven’t regretted
A single moment of her company.
I guess…
She was what I needed.
For she has  been with me every since then.
Yes…
I’ve needed her

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Written June 27th, 2005

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  • Asylum Princess
    November 25, 2008

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    This is a nice one...I can hear your thought process throughout the piece and how you are coming to the final conclusion in the end that the need is there and that it does exist.

  • Harlequin
    September 2, 2005
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    Beautiful piece of writing very deep, you have the gift of painting a picture with your words, I'm impressed...Harlequin


  • Ember Rose
    June 28, 2005
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    Beautiful background to a wonderful piece. Whatever happens in life, one should always have times like this with another to remember with beauty and fondness. You painted a flowing and wondrous picture with this. rose