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*Each Cut Is A Lie*

Tears falling out my eyes,
While im thinking of you.
They see my arm and ask why,
I say each cut is a lie from you.

1,2,3,4
You always said you loved me.
5,6,7,8
You said you'd never leave me.

I stop and think of you,
But it just makes me want more.
How could you say you love me too,
When you stabbed my heart to the core.

9,10,11
I still love you.
12,13,14
So many more i can count by two's.

16,18,20,22
You said you never lie.
24,26,28
You sat their and watched me cry.

Each cut is a lie,
That still flows.
Im sorry but goodbye,
30 ends the show.



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Yeah.. this is gay.
Written June 27th, 2005

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  • crying inside out
    June 27, 2005
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    This is true for everyone. It sucks big time but someone once told me "they have moved on, they are having fun, go out and find something that makes you happy." Your the only person that can determin your happiness.


  • Kristen Marie
    June 27, 2005
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    Its not gay! I loved it! God dont ever stop writing.