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Exactly What I Need

Exhausted;
I've lost it,
And I can't find my way back.
My bed is calling my name, but a
Lifetime of sleep escapes me, even though
That's exactly what I need right now.

Lonely;
Console me,
I just miss you oh-so-much.
Contagious doesn't worry me, but
I still can't see you, even though
That's exactly what I need right now.

Stressed;
This ain't the best.
Too much to do, but there's no such
Thing as a 25-hour day, even though
That's exactly what I need right now.

The end is overdue;
It's just been too long and too hard.
I'm looking for an excuse to fall apart,
To let my sanities unravel....

Cause that's exactly what I need right now.

Author notes

I wrote this quite a while ago, and just found it. I'm not quite sure if I like it, but oh well. Read away...
Written April 26th, 2005

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  • tarnishedheart
    October 25, 2005
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    It's a great poem about sadness and being stressed, I think it is really good! loved it.

  • EchoesofSilence
    June 27, 2005
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    I like it a lot... perhaps because it's very honest, and perhaps because I know that someone very close to me can relate. Sometimes, it seems that those things that you need the most are always out of reach, and then once you're able to get your hands on whatever it is, it doesn't do you any good at all. This speaks of growing needs, and timelessness. Thanks for sharing.


  • Piper77
    June 27, 2005
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    Well, I like it! It's awesome. Keep up the great work!