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As You Cry (2)

As you cry
Softly I wipe the tears from your eyes.
The pain you’ve known
Is erased by my love.
For there are new worlds for us to discover
And the memories shall be beautiful forever more.
Yes…
I’ll hold you
When you need me.
And all of our fantasies shall come true.
Maybe if you wish hard enough
We’ll make love
Wherever you want.
Your wish is my command.
Go ahead!
Go for it!
Yes…
I love you
For there you are
Even in my fondest dreams.
For your love has brought me closer
Than I ever  imagined
Between two people.
Our love is a bond between us.
Don’t ever take that away.
I need you.
And I always will

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Written June 27th, 2005

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  • Ember Rose
    June 28, 2005
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    This reaches out on so many levels with great depth of feeling. No wonder you have such a vast female following. If I ever found someone like you, there is little doubt that through a reality style meeting face to face, if I were asked I would say 'yes'. To touch the heart of another over time...even space...to share with another the essence of oneself is a gift that should never be turned away. Even should that gift turn out to be Santa's bag of coal. Life is for the living. Taking chances is a part of life. Without it there is only a shattered mirror reflecting that loss. Hope this makes some sense. rose