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Let My Love Last


Cold sweat running down on my face.
Just the touch of your embrace
Drives me  insane.
I never can enough of your love.
But then that’s always been true.
Can’t you see what you’re doing to me?
Some say that you have a cold heart.
And that love is just a game to you.
But it can’t be true.
Why?
Because my love is too strong.
And I need it to last forever.
I can’t give it up.
I won’t!
Not when I have you in my arms.
They say I’m only dreaming.
And that you’ll never be true.
Please?
Tell them that they’re wrong.
That I’m no fool for loving you.
Yes…
I love you.
And if you left
My world would be gone.
So hold me
And let my love last.

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Written June 27th, 2005

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