I'll tell a tale, a magic tale, about a little boy.
This boy, he was no average boy, for he was always young.
He lived in a magic land located in the sky.
Oh yes! This little boy, well, he had learned to fly.
'Second star on the right' was Never Never Land.
This was such a splendid place with magic all around.
There were lost boys, and pirates and mean Ole' Captain Hook.
He had a hook for a hand, and a mean and scary look.
Now I need to mention this little boy's best friend.
She was an itsy, bitsy soul, and she loved to play pretend.
This little, bitty, tiny girl, was beautiful and caring.
This tiny slip of a girl, was Tinkerbell the Fairy.
Now, this boy is happy, to stay a little boy.
He thinks fighting pirates is such a wondrous joy.
He never has to go to work, he always stays up late.
Oh wouldn't it be a joyful thing to have such a wondrous fate.
You must listen to me now, and listen to me good.
For there's a secret I must tell, and make sure it's understood.
If you can think a happy thought, and yes, I know you can.
You can fly through the air, just like Peter Pan!
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I'm not to sure about the title of this.
Written June 27th, 2005
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Thank You very much for your wonderful comment, Your encouragement is very much appreciated!! Each comment made make me feel better and better about my writing. Thank You sooo much
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My friend, you have a wonderful flow, and a cute rhyme for this delightful piece which provides the perfect vehicle for the delivery of your child's tale. I loved it from beginning to end. Good Job!
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Yes, I was going to title it Peter Pan, but there was another poem in the contest with that same name. Maybe after the contest is over, I will rename it. Thank You for the comment and encouragemenr. It is very much appreciated!!
Brandy
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Great write about Peter Pan Keep writing, this is a beautiful write which I liked a lot Maybe call it 'Peter Pan'?
All the best,
Pozo
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Thank You ever so much! This is really appreciated. It makes me feel good about this poem, and my writing in general. This really encourages me!!!
Brandy
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a new look at never never land
You realy open up the book and gave it a new look - a look of honesty witch put a new image on captain hook - and you bathed little tinker bell in a gloryus beauty one that shined in brilliant very astonishing look - and in your poem i found the meaning of all you told you realy put a fine tuned picture in this awsome little book... -
Thank You! I know how you feel. I just turned 28 in June and I have three kids, oh I would love to be their age againg!! Shoot...I would love to be your age again...knowing what I know now of course. Thank You for the comment and support. Best wishes to you!!
BRandy
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Wow... for a start.. i love the picture! And the background youve chosen goes really well with it.
. As for the poem itself, its fantastic.. tho i must say was never too keen on peter pan.. tinkerbell scared me and i always wanted to be grown up anyway.. so the idea of staying a kid for life didnt intrest me that much.. though now im only 15 and wish i was 5 again already! lol! . Anyway.. well done, great poem, keep writing. JESSxxx
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Thank You so much for your lovely comment. I had the same problem with my son last year with his Spiderman costume although I did not make that one. But he loved it!! He wanted to wear it all the time!!
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I love the image. This made me smile. My oldest son dressed up like Peter Pan one Halloween. I very carefully made his costume and it turned out just perfect. So perfect in fact that he didn't want to take it off. After three days, we finally had to insist! This brought back some lovely memories for me. Thank you.
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Its good! good job and thanks for entering my contest!
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