When you think about mothers day
you probably think about laughing and having fun
making your mom feel the greatest
telling her she is number one
mothers day is not supposed to be about tears
and i don't think mothers day is supposed to be sad
so please answer me this GOD
why is that all my mom has ever had
Every night i hold her
and i just watch her as she cries
and every time a tear slides down her face
inside i just die
on her birthday she got a broken heart (again)
and on mothers day (again) she got to cry
she has been broken so many times
that i just don't know how she wakes up everyday and still tries
my mom does not deserve this
and GOD if you cared why would you do this to her everyday
please GOD i beg you
Just take all her pain away
please just let her smile
and be happy forever
please just finally let her have
the best mothers day ever
Author notes
again, this poem is for my mom.....i love you
Written June 27th, 2005
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I like this, It hard to watch you hero's suffer, I had to watch mom go though a divorce, and
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I liked this one and i liked how you cared so much about ur mom. I think thats really cool. However, i do not think u should be questioning GOD about ur mom when there are infants out there that are killed every day! little things that didnt even live long enough to do anything wrong. Im not tryin to say that ur moms a bad ppl or nuthin but why does ANYONE have to go through that i think that its kinda selfish u only want her to smile agian. But i kinda understand cuz i wish the same thing. But today i guess im just a walking contridiction so ill just shut up ttyl love u
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Oh my God, not many people can mke me do this, but I feel like I'm about to cry. AMAZING write. Keep up your good work, and if it's a poem based on personal experience, I'm really sorry you have to go through it. You put a lot of emotion into this and I can tell. Awesome job, keep writing.
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hey hunna...this poem is just..WOW, thats all i can say...the third stanza was amazing...and i acually mean that!! the love you have for your mom is incredible...she is honostly lucky that she has some1 here like you...i love you kaka..awspme poem as allways!! -Create4ever
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I really enjoyed this poem because I can tell you're sincere about wishing your mom didn't have to go through so much pain all of the time, and you just wish that she could have at least one good day. . . I love my mom, and I'm really glad that I'm not the only person on here who doesn't hate their mother! I constantly read poems about how horrible parents are, and it's really refreshing to read about someone who cares about their mother. . . And besides that, the poem wasn't bad either
. . . . well, keep writing!
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This is a great poem gothangle. Your mother can be so proud of you. It almost made me cry. The way you expressed you feelings in this one is unbelievable. Lots of love for you and your mother.
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wow that was good kala you are without a doubt the best poet ever !!! and if you dont beleive me than...shut up and beleive me dammit!!!
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holy shit... well i really liked this poems is really deep..u know what i dont have a MOM and i'm a bit deppres about that.. but i think u have to enjoy ur mum the best you can..make her feel happy tell her u love her and that she is your world.. and she will be happier i hope my advice helps u good luck and good write!!
sol
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