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Tossed

The love I had was tossed out of my heart,
The poems I wrote were tossed in the trash can,
The secrets I kept for you were tossed out of my head.
Everything I gave to you or got from you was tossed.
I'm through with all the pain,
All the lies,
And all the hidden secrets.
You tossed me out the world.
For the first time I can't breathe.
I'm suffocating from the tossed love.
I miss you so much,
But there is nothing to do to change any of it.
I just wish I had one more chance to keep everything tossed.


Dedication to: deathbeforgotten
Song: Broken
Artist: Seether featuring Amy Lee

Author notes

I'm sorry... I told you that I wouldn't write about you anymore, but I can't help the way I feel.
Written June 27th, 2005

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  • secretlover
    June 30, 2005
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    hey. this is megan. this was pretty good. well, i'm gonna go read some more of yours. just wanted to say ho.

  • Born OF SIN
    June 29, 2005
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    YOu know I understand where you are coming from but you will realize that you don't need him in the end i know it hyurts now it always does but it eventually gets better and he has no right to get mad at you for righting about him your not talking abad about him so don't worry about if he gests pissed of not


  • Forgotten Warrior
    June 27, 2005
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    Yea Tabby is write but this is a good poem i really like it but sammy i hope gets better 4 u and maybe he feels the same way but he is wit alex so u should just wait and let him alex be togather and respct that buddy
    much love 4rm the
    Forgotten Warrior

  • BeautifulCurse
    June 27, 2005
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    he might get pissed b/c you wrote about him..but it;s a good poem, with a good song dedicated at the end...sometimes love gets tossed and people stray away and leave out of your life...you'll survive and things will get better...it just waasn't menat ot be and you have to learn to let go...there is someone out there who loves you for you and who wants to be with you no matter what...jesy wasn't that person...when you finally get over him and your vision clears,you'll see that he wasn't worth all the pain...great write.