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Good-Bye

Good-Bye, Good-Bye
My friend Good-Bye
Good-bye my sweet, my love
Good-bye my heart, my soul
Good-bye, my love, Good-Bye

Good-Bye, Good-Bye
Though our bond is so young
It is my sorrow
It is my pain
Good-Bye, Good-Bye

Good-Bye, Good Bye
You were my muse, my friend
and I must say;
and I wish it far away
Good-Bye, Good-Bye

It was long ago,
years I fear
you left us all
and now I can finally say
*\_Good-Bye, Good-Bye




_\*Good-Bye, Good-Bye
I finally realize
I mustn't say that
You will always by in my heart
so only for the passing of your life...
Good-Bye, Good-Bye

Author notes

This is actually a didcation to my gram.  She died the day b4 thanksgiving in the year 2001.  She was the grandparent I was closest to, and the third to die that year.  This and Ashes are my memorials to her!
Written June 27th, 2005

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