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Eternal Solace

I've been wondering
For years on end
What is perfect
Exactly...?

Perfect is having everything
That one could possibly need
In life
With no challenges, no surprises
...No adventures

Either that or,
Perfect is having
The right amount of everything

And in that sense
Perfect is You

You're unconditional love
Gives me the strength to persevere,
To grow, to learn, and to love

You have taught me
How it feels to have everything
That I've ever dreamed of
At my finger tips...

The shine in your eyes
Reflecting every color of the sky,
Filling me with passion, reassurance, safety...
And security overwhelms my soul the moment
Your gaze falls over me

Your brilliant smile
Reflects unto me
And in chaste silence,
Adjoins love with eternity

Your eternal gorgeous defines
Are enough to make my eyes turn to stone
Fixed on you,
And makes me simply dumb

To me...
You're amazing, solace, desirable
Close enough to perfect
And you've taught me how to love
In the only way that I know how

Years from now
When we're trapped in our new lives
And you're straining to remember my face,
The sparkle of my eyes,
The shine in my smile...

Recall my voice, and how it carried
The three words, "I Love You"
And everything else about me,
Will surely fall into place........

 

Author notes

This guy...is surely beyond anything that words may describe. He is everything to me and even when we're far beyond the years of seeing eachother, talking and interacting, I know that somehow he'll never leave my side. I love you Kyle  

I was inspired by a convo that me and Nikki (FairyOnMy Wall)had a few nights ago. So props to you, Nik! I love ya babe!
Written June 27th, 2005

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  • A Devils Angel
    July 6, 2005
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    Hehe Nik...it is indeed our convo. You're just oh so inspiring and a brilliant idea for a poem popped into my mind. So thank you for the wonderful ideas Kyle, Kyle, Kyle...he is up to his no good again and being a prick.......i like to call him a rubber band Good metaphor, huh? He pulls away once he has my best interest and then when I'm almost moved on from him, he'll snap back to me and wrap me around him just like always...it's not workin this time. I'm prepared!!! I'll need your assistance to keep me in line tho, there is something about him that is just enthralling. Blah...guys will be guys. ANYWAYS---thanks for the convo and the comment babe, you're there for me like always! Love you babe!

  • A Devils Angel
    July 6, 2005
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    Thank you for your exquisite comment on my poem, "Eternal Solace" This guy is absolutely amazing and is the closest thing to love that a teenager could possibly feel at such a young age. We are departing come highschool this year, and I worry that I'm too dependant for my happiness on him, so I am trying to find a way to be happy without him by my side. He is also up to his guyish ways...being rather blunt and jerkish. Oh well...I'm babbling, so thank you for the comment

  • FairyOnMy Wall
    June 28, 2005
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    hehe finally K has a good one....if he breaks your heart i'll break his nose though. you still have to meet charlie, and i have yet to meet kyle. haha. oh well good poem! i was like wow this sounds like our conversation! and it is! haha. love you darlin

  • guardian warrior
    June 28, 2005
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    Great work describing the perfection of love. Though flawed love is still the greatest thing we can feel in life. Your words remind me of how I feel for someone important to me. I was deeply touched by this poem