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Johnny, my Love! (a little on the adult side)

A sweet caress, a warm embrace.
I reach out to touch his face.
His eyes are hidden by his hair.
I brush it back to see his lustful stare.

I shiver with anticipation.
He strokes my thigh to my elation.
He sinks slowly to his knees.
I'm his now, his to please.

His lips touch mine, with a tender tender kiss.
For him to take me now would be such bliss.
Slowly now, he gets undressed.
I spread my fingers and stroke his chest.

His skin is velvet over steel.
He can't know how good he feels.
His muscles ripple with delight.
It's going to happen, he'll be mine tonight.

My heart is beating wild, and fast.
I've wanted this so long, now he is mine at last.
His hands move over my heated body.
Finally, I feel his weight move over me.

His hardness presses against my burning flesh.
We two become one as our bodies mesh.
His lips taste like wine and honey.
I whisper "Oh my God, I want you Johnny"

Suddenly, I'm pulled from my sex crazed slumber.
I sit up fast in my bed and I hear the thunder.
A storm has come, lightening brightens the sky.
A fantasy interrupted, I want to cry!

My little boy's standing by my side.
I can see the fear in his eyes.
"Mommy, help, I've had a nightmare."
I smile at him, but in my head I scream:

                           "OH MY LORD! THIS IS SO UNFAIR!"


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Okay, I know I have no chance at winning this, but I just HAD to join this contest!! Oh, how I have dreamed of my dear Johnny. *sigh*  Oh yeah, my option is #1 Johnny Depp.
Written June 27th, 2005

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  • Fairy Moon
    July 19, 2005
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    awesome

    Wonderful! Made me think it was real. I enjoyed it alot. Thank you for sharing.~~Shannon~~


  • Captain Changa
    June 29, 2005
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    That's how it goes. Always get woke up at the wrong time. Good job.


  • SexyAngel0418
    June 29, 2005
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    WOW... This is awesome!!! It is very "on the adult side" but it is really really good!!! I really like this poem!!!

    Thank you for entering and good luck!!!

    Beth


  • LadyLuna
    June 28, 2005
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    Yes they do!!! Thank you for your comment!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 27, 2005
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    This is such a delightful story! You had me giggling uproariously at the ending. Children do have a way of making their presence known at the most inopertune times! Goodluck in the contest.
    ♥ Kimberly


  • LadyLuna
    June 27, 2005
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    Thank You very much for your comment. He is so sexy isn't he?


  • LionessK silver member
    June 27, 2005
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    I can truly relate to the last two stanzas...wonderful descriptions here and who doesn't like Johnny Depp?
    |sigh|...
    yes I think many have had that dream..this is a wonderful write, thank you for sharing it and best of luck in the contest

  • LadyLuna
    June 27, 2005
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    Thank You very much for your comment and support. I have always thought he was sexy when his hair was long and scraggily, with the mustache, instead of when he was clean cut and shaved. Although don't get me wrong he is sexy to me then too lol. . There were some very tough options, I wanted to write about A LOT of the men.

    Brandy


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    June 27, 2005
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    I never cared for him until I saw him in Don Juan de Marco...OMG! ahem...sorry, Great poem and I hope you place somewhere just for providing all of us with a great fantasy! sigh... All the best,

    Lily ~*

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