pt. 5
captured moments
of love lost
live forever
in my mind
can't seem
to make them real
heart aches
for my one true love
candle flickers
in the cold dark night
under saddened shadows
she losses the fight
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pt. 6
clear away
don't let it stay
you know the way
to perfection
stand tall
against it all
climb the wall
of their blindness
open your mind
you'll be just fine
living sublime
all in due time
~Lady Raven~
Author notes
Do Not Ask! Sometimes when I sit and clear my mind of all thoughts and sit with pen and paper this stuff just comes out. Until I am done and read it back I have no idea. So now, once finished I sit and wonder what it all means. Hope you enjoy these two new pieces.
Written June 27th, 2005
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What if it means to be alone? I mean, what if those that are the closest to you do not see it the same way? What if you know that if you speak up and try to rise above you will be alone? What then?
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I liked part 6 more than 5. Not because part 5 was lacking anything, it's just that part 6 stood out to me. Part 6 seemed to ring out more truths than 5.
stand tall
against it all
climb the wall
of their blindness
This has almost been my attitude through life and all of its trials and tribulations. If we stand up and stand tall, sometimes we have to fight tooth and nail for what is right. Yet throughout it all we must raise above others to grab ahold of what was meant through all time for us to achieve. -
mommy,
wow this was amazing! Im speechless after reading this one! very well written
Angel
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