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Eyes

 

Her eyes
Burn sapphire in the
Fading night
Guiding with their
Cat-like glow
Hiding in the light
But glowing greatly
Into  night
She guides the men
Full of desire
But the siren call
And failed tries
Push them away
She has the beauty
The wit, the charm
Many friends, but
She is utterly alone

Author notes

I decided for today I would write about the beotches at school as if they were nice loving people.
However as that is a lie, I should post this on April 1st.
Written June 27th, 2005

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  • laurel anne
    June 28, 2005
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    V you are so funny how come you didn't tell me that you started a club?


  • AlyssaEngaged
    June 27, 2005
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    KICK BOOTY!!!LOL

    ooo i like this one, is soooooo good i love ur writing so much . keep it up