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My Friend Edna

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Edna makes angels look  like sadists,
Demonstrating such spiritual care,
No saint was ever so devoted
And heaven now sings her praises there.
Soft tender immaculate words she writes
Weaves gentleness within each soft line,
Eeee by gum you know what I mean,
Ecstatically repeating, divine.
True to tradition she always stands,
Love's lullaby is now in her words,
Overwhelming my soul, none compare,
Verily noting the smell of turds,
Each time I read her poetic words

 

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Written June 27th, 2005

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  • Musimwa
    June 29, 2005
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    very good

    What a beautiful poem. I really liked it


  • masterblaster gold member
    June 28, 2005
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    Hi my friend, you would have liked the painting lol, Royo loves his ladies and they are well endowed, lol, thanks a million, think I'll retire to cloisters, heehee, hugs dI


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    June 28, 2005
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    Nice one Masterblaster don't tell me you have been accosted by a MOD on an Edna Comp that just too Ironic, the poem was great I’m just miffed I missed the porno elf


  • masterblaster gold member
    June 27, 2005
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    Hi Edna, well someone has removed the pic and it was not me, I personally did not think a nude not even showing certain parts is something to BAN, but things are going from the sublime to the ridiculas, thanks a million, God help us what we they ban next ? maybe the mention of a elf looking for a wife might be considered pornographic, hugs Di


  • Edna Sweetlove
    June 27, 2005
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    Now you know I wouldn't criticise,
    That's not my style
    BUT
    BUT
    BUT
    I feel you should say "Eeee, by gum!"
    and
    I am confused by
    "non compare"
    (I think you've got un poco typo there! or maybe it's Italian!)

    Line 12: I do like the turdy bit but I AM SHOCKED that anyone so genteel as thou wouldst say such a thing or use such a rude word! Gobsmacked I am.

  • masterblaster gold member
    June 27, 2005
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    Hi Caducus she is very different to anyone,lol, hugs Di


  • masterblaster gold member
    June 27, 2005
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    Hi my friend, good to see you around, would you like me to remove pic, could always put in a sexy one of Luis Royo that would get them going, lol, hugs Di. ps you did notice second from last line, n0? lol


  • effundo
    June 27, 2005
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    I have had the pleasure of coming across her -

    and i do NOT mean the other.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    June 27, 2005
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    This is getting way, way, way out of hand. I have to confess something. The picture's not me on one of my better days.

    PS: I am amused the moderators removed the picture. Applaud natch.
    Edited on Jul 02, 11:22 because ''.

  • masterblaster gold member
    June 27, 2005
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    Hi, thanks a million, hugs Di


  • E A Collins
    June 27, 2005
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    sweet

    So very lovely indeed. It is a pure blessing.

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