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Would you.......

 

Who's the special someone
In you life you'd do anything for....
Whom would you take to bliss
If you ever possessed that gift?

Would you cross the seven seas,
To spend a moment together.
Or would you rather stay at home,
And hear his voice for hours.

Would you quit your job to be with him,
Or would you see him after,
Would you die if she asked you to,
And still be madly in love...

Seems so easy, to fall in love...
Harder still to stay together
But true love triumphs against all odds,
And binds 'em all together

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Written June 27th, 2005

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  • ebgurl788
    December 25, 2005
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    Makes me think about the girl I love, nice =]


  • Sphere
    December 21, 2005
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    yeah, true. but for love to bind 'em together.. you need both to be equally in love---now that, is a rare one.


  • intelligentbacteria
    July 6, 2005
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    this one is very cute..I am touched..keep it up

  • Dare2Dream
    June 28, 2005
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    aaaaaaaw how very sweet!!!! Thanks for ur loverly comment, my dear friend