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Sangria Sunrise (unfinished)

Past midnight,
the owl in me opens bright eyes,
awake, aware
while he goes in and out of
conciousness,
eyes closed,
lashes fluttering.

Good vibrations
from deep throat purring
as I gently claw weak spots:
along his back
around his shoulders
above his ears
and around the waistband,
coyly reaching a litte further
inducing panting. 

He paws outer thighs
while nibbling inward,
gradually becoming more centered.
Soft bites hit hard, as shockwaves
are emitted down south.
I exhale slowly to the
long laps of his moist tongue.   


~~~

Legs entwined and
eyes closed to the
comfortable silence,
the white noise, of
soft breathing
hearts beating
to the coda of sleep.

Author notes

I was inspired by something on TV, so I just went with it. I hadn't written anything in a while, so I didn't want to get rusty.
Written June 27th, 2005

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  • Anthony-
    June 27, 2005
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    How intense. I really like the use of sangria in the title and that is why I clicked onto this. Keep on going, breathing sensuality. Tony. (The pic's full on hehe)