Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Internal Flame



*Catch a spark
And though it burns at first
For I'm not used to the intensity or any intensity
I clasp it tight and kindle its glow
hoping, praying it will grow
Because this spark meant so much
Can't, but greedily wish to,
Imagine what it would be like
If it was an Internal Flame*

Author notes

another old one
Written June 26th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • June 26, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    oh i love it!!!!! i love it soooooooo much!!! short but beautiful!! i remember this one too!!!! amazing write! im so glad you came back!!! and i love this poem! i cant wait until you post more of them!!!!!

    the word choice in this poem was amazing! once again i loved it!