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Toys of Manipulation

Lies
                                Betrayal
         Blind

                                             all because you wish to play
           Play with your toys of manipulation

    The strings for movement
                                                     and smooth music as entertainment

                             Jokes to cover your lies
                                                              and support your plan.

                                                                                  False Faith
                        Control
                                                          Torture
Scattered is the truth
                                     Far from Reality
                                                                  Hollow inside
nothing left to gain or receive

                                      Congratulations.
                                     
                                        The chambers contain a virus you created
Eating away life into a new, dark existence
                                                 Heart turned to dust & ashes

Fuck you...and the girl you cheated on me too.

              May God have mercy on the day of Judgment
           
            I'll never stop praying for you because after all...
      You're still a child of God, despite my bitterness toward you

Author notes

like random punches of bitterness I decided to arrange my words like an emotion...or thoughts as it were.
F*** Y** Colin... give back what's mine and forget I existed.
Forget our words and promise broken because of you. Just leave me alone, and May God Save you from your sins! *ahem* I'll be praying for you.
Written June 26th, 2005

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  • patches
    June 26, 2005
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    wow you got right to the point i like it twisted but i like it