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Now Who's Strange

 

Dear Diary,
Today is worse than yesterday
And I believe
That my pain is going to stay
I can't relieve
This headache or pain
My angry tears
Drip on this page and stain
The page of my fears

Dear Diary,
I hate them worse today
On the brink
Of throwing it away
I don't think
Forgiveness is my choice
I'm assuming though
They can even hear my voice
This pain will never show

Dear Diary,
Today I made a friend
She's really nice
Now my heart will mend
I won't get hurt twice
I think that things are
Going to change
They went too far
Now who's strange?

Author notes

About girls at school who called me "strange".
Written June 26th, 2005

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  • Brandy3 gold member
    June 26, 2005
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    This poem is a awesome write,thanks for entering our contest,and goodluck.
    Brandy3 & VermillionKittie


  • AlyssaEngaged
    June 26, 2005
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    greatness

    this is really good, its diffrent but its good..plz keep writing awsome poems i love them.-alyssa