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Time after Time.

I tried this time,
but I didn't pull through,
lost in my mind,
and confused by you.
I tried again,
to tell myself to let it go,
but deep within,
are secrets you may never know.
Comfort me,
yeah things will be ok,
until you turn your back and leave,
and then things start to fade.
Yeah it'll all be alright,
you keep tellin me time after time,
but when you're so lost within your own life,
you forget what you left behind.

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Written June 26th, 2005

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  • gothangel
    June 27, 2005
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    wow, this was an awesome poem...very strong.....very full of emotion...keep up the awesome work...you are amazing...great job


  • Alone inside
    June 27, 2005
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    awwww and wowww! this is so powerfully written and it's full of so much emotion. you really expressed the emotion in it well and it is really sad and dark! wow! great write and keep writing