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Never More

I'm just me,
So leave me be,
I'm sick of hearing you scream, now i live by a new decree,
It's always aimed at me, always me.

One day what you say,
Will haunt you, O you'll pay,
I'm tired of your perfectionism, it all ends today,
For here on out I'll never obey.

You've had my blood on your hands,
You've broken my trust, no more commands,
It's time to give into my demands,
Nothing's ever good enough, you'll never understand.

So be it, friend no more,
Peace has ended this is war,
So be it, time to settle the score,
I'll see your hand in my face Never More.


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Picture #(s)-xx & 12 Brady <3's Shanz
Written June 26th, 2005

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  • Selithia
    September 22, 2006
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    sweet

    awesome!!!!!!!!


  • ImNot
    July 24, 2005
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    wow

    wow awesome job ths poem was intense im not sure if that's the word but yea anyways keep up the good writes!!!!!! u deserve an applaud!!!!!ur welcome lol <3 Sebana


  • Marishka Bloodrayne
    July 3, 2005
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    i cant even explain how good that was! so much emition, so much pain, i feel your pain in this poem! great write and keep it up! remember i am here for you!

  • candyecane2002
    June 26, 2005
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    whoa