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Colours in flight

Coloured...
Having angel's wings
Towards nectar laden
Blessings of God is your journey
Butterfly

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Written June 26th, 2005

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  • scars never fade
    June 27, 2005
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    hey u spell colour like i do lol neways nice write


  • estelm4
    June 27, 2005
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    syllable count isnt strict, but anyway...
    Nice one!

  • laya
    June 26, 2005
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    beautiful

    beautifully conceivedand very well composed.congrats.