The angst ridden teen..
Drawing on her life of competency and riddles..
The riddle of life has befuddled her yet again...
and here she starts back at the beginning.
She knows that it wasn't suppose to last forever...
but in her head...it did.
Forever of the day of wine and roses..
long talks and sunlet arguments on the beach..
she thought that was bliss..
The first kiss that sent her tumbling down into the abyss of....
nature.
The nature of sexual deviancy...and
the nature of life, love and happiness.
This is what she was suppose to feel like..
The angst ridden teen.
Her first love
her last love
her love in between..
was for her only dear one...
as he lay in the coffin and
the tears dripped down...
her heart fell apart...one...
last...time.
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Written June 25th, 2005
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it speaks to me! :Cries: lol I love it, great job as usual, a great artist among us! I love this poem yay! lol dont ask again...Keep it up!
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Smitten indeed with this one, quite unusual in its approach, beautifully done. An elegance to it.
Sam. -
I love your poetry,...far deeper than anything I can hope to attain...
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I find this to be a good poem, but sad. Hope it is fiction. Good to read you again. Seems that young folks write a lot of dark poetry. I have my moments. Got anything cheerful for me. I could do with a happy write.
Andy -
Oh wow.... I am stunned.
I thought you described the feeling of tumbling into a first love so well... I haven't seen anything quite like this. GREAT JOB!
And I am literally about to fall asleep on the keyboard..... so KEEP IT UP! I HEART YOU LOL
ita
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::claps:: i much much much like this one more!!! ::hugs:: mwah great job babe
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