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Dejected

I was finally happy for once
I thought I could be strong
But you took all my trust
And pierced it with the painful blade
Your emotional pain is torture
More than the physical pain I used to endure
You've taken every happy thought
And took them to line my grave
You take my happy days and turn them into nightmares
You take my bad days and make them excruciating
Why can't I be happy...like you want me to be?
Except you force me to drown in my misery
The happiness that brought me life
Is now the emotion that I hide.

Author notes

Hmmm...I havn't posted anything in awhile..
Written June 25th, 2005

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  • survivalism
    June 27, 2005
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    Thanks for your kind words, but I feel this is not one of my best pieces. Thanks anyway.


  • xXshadesXofXblackXx
    June 27, 2005
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    i can relate. great poem. keep it up.
    Rock On,
    ~~Nick~~
    p.s. evanescence fuckin ROCKS!!!