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Dear God

Dear God,
Who is not there
Because you don't care
About me, my heart
How people fall apart
Because you are cold
And I am told
That you are great
And my good fate
Rests with you
Even if I wanted to
I wouldn't give you my trust
You can try, if you must
You can send to hell,
Me, an empty shell
But I don't care
When you are there
When you stay
Two can play 
At that game
It's a crying shame
That when I'm in fear
You aren't here
So God, please go away
You're never here, you never stay

Author notes

I was mad at God today, so, this came from it!

Written June 25th, 2005

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  • Exploit Stereotypes
    August 13, 2006
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    I agree...when has god ever been there really? I lost all faith in him years ago fuck that bitch oh and good poem by the way


  • FallingAngel
    October 18, 2005
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    We all tend to get mad at God once in a while. But he is always there, and he does always care.


  • AlyssaEngaged
    June 26, 2005
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    AWSOME!!!

    I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS !!!!!!!!. i sooo realte to this poem...if u want to talk i am here..-alyssa