Upon your eye's
I'll smile my child,
And turn the red back green.
I'll dry the tears
You're drowning in,
And raise you from your knees.
I'll cleanse your soul
With which you grace
Upon my grave so cold.
I'll warm your heart
And soothe your pain,
You are my earthly home.
Author notes
I hope people find my meaning in this 
Thank you so much for reading it
Written June 25th, 2005
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this is beautiful. you have done so much with so little words, and you have created a beautiful poem. you have done well. xxSExx
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thank you for sharing this well written--spiritual and not at all religious write with me. i am looking forward to reading more from you. hope2makeit
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Hey, thank you so much for you comment, means alot....this piece to me isn't about God, more about when someone (or me) dies....and how I want people to know that even though I wont be here physically, I will Always be within them, if you know what I mean Hee hee. But I love that you take it the way you want to see it
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sounds like the lord loves someone here .great writing uplifting
god is an awsome god,and you are a good poet god bless keep up the great writing -
The poem is very sweet and touching, you are a truly gifted poet m'dear.
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This is completely amazing. I wish you'd write more because of what I've seen...you're an amazing writer and we need people like you on this site. This was sweet and I'm glad you're finding that in someone.
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My heart is full.
And thank Christ that you are here with me to help through a time which is black and blue.Yes you will carry me on your shoulders let me weep silent tears and show me how to love again.I am so glad that I read this.It speaks to my heart and uncertain future.Almost a Prayer.May God Bless you.Thanks.Elizabeth. -
Not sure if you have meant it so, but this has a very spiritual or religious feel...
I'll dry the tears
You're drowning in,
And raise you from your knees.
I'll cleanse your soul
Very hopeful.
Good job
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I love this!!.. It is a really great write!!.. It was short, but you said so much within the words that you used.. Awesome job with this.. Keep up the great work and I hope to read more from you soon!!!
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excellent
Good write Leah. I'm back online. This poem is really wonderful. Thanks for writing it. By the way last time I visited with you You were serious about a guy. What happened? Anyhow I am thinking about you. XXXOOO
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I love this Leah. Amazing little write. So much said and so much meant in so few words.
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I'm not sure how religious this is, versus spiritual. but an "earthly home" seems to imply that there is no heaven, unless it's just home for the body and not the soul
FYI: The plural of eye is eyes, not eye's. -
good
very good one of the best I've read. change the word "back" to
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Wow this reminds me of the movie The Passion. I don't if you've seen it or if you've even wanted to see it but if you haven't there is this part was Jesus falls down carrying the cross and his mother Mary remembers another time when as a child he fell down and she ran to him and took care of him and she did the same thing when he fell carrying the cross. This really reminded me of that time and it was really touching. This was beutifully written!
-Kayla
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I'll cleanse your soul
With which you grace
Upon my grave so cold.
I'll warm your heart
And soothe your pain,
You are my earthly home
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i'll warm your heart, wow , nice poem, keep it writing, i see that you have more pasion in you
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