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Birthday Treasures ( for acid fairy)

Bubble gum kisses
and sweet dreams
fill the air
                               as I see you smile my friend
why?
                   simply because you can
it matters not with the warmth you hold
                                                      in friendship
somehow you've made memories that matter
and touched places with my heart
kept what needs to be kept
                                       in that special niche

if you could see through my eyes
those places special
                                            in their own way
held in private realms where acceptance is found

treasures rich
                              where bonds are found
and in time memories
                                   that are worth their weight in gold
                    simply by me knowing you

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Written June 25th, 2005

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  • -diamond tears-
    June 26, 2005
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    thanks sidewinder sorry i have commented so late, i have been out all weekened for my birthday But anyway, tis a wonderful write