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Prayer

Prayer
feelings, wishes
from deep inside ensue
conversing silently with You
message.

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Written June 25th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    August 19

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    This is interesting. I guess it's all jumbled together the hopes, the dreams, the feelings they all meld together to create that desire to know another person.

  • laya
    July 27, 2005
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    beautiful

    True.deep desire is prayer.or viceversa. beautiful. all luck.


  • antique
    June 27, 2005
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    this is beautiful .. it gives me a warm feeling to read it .. beautifully penned ... thankyou so much for entering and I wish you the best of luck in the contest .... keep the ink flowing

    ~Aimee

  • ankuraa
    June 25, 2005
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    Beautiful di!
    Best of luck in the contest...