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HuMaN

I'm only human,
I make mistakes,
but that's not a reason
for my faith to fade.

I'm only human,
I make mistakes,
but nothing feels worse
than this heartache.

I'm only human,
i make mistakes,
but nothing can stop me
from the decision i am about to make.

I'm only human,
i make mistakes,
because giving my heart to you
was a terrible mistake.

I'm only human,
I make mistakes,
but you commited the greatest one of all,
by forsaking my heart.


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Written June 24th, 2005

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  • sky black
    June 29, 2005
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    awwww this is gorgeous, yes never give away everything you are to one person, NEVER! even if you've been together years tis NOT a good idea. anyway i loved this one, really brought past memories and emotions for me. nice job. l8az sky xxxxx


  • Tears-of-Glass
    June 26, 2005
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    omh!!! wow this is amasing!! ur such a great writer !! keep it up!!! great job

  • preciouscatie
    June 25, 2005
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    awesome

    omg juana this was such a cute an awesome poem i really like it sorry i havent been able to talk to you i have been away from friends if anything ask darling and then she willl tell you im having issues...well other than that i love this poem really expressive...good job

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    June 25, 2005
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    WELL DONE!

    Good poem. Providing this is a true story, sounds like the person who forsaked your heart was somewhat of a perfectionist. BUt I agree with you . . . you ARE only human and of course you'll screw up from time to time like all of us.
    But nonetheless you deserve a lot of good and I know you have a lot of it. Good job, my fried. Well done! Brian
    Edited on Jun 25, 5:51 because ''.