Irrefutable Torment
The tears keep building, ready to explode
How much longer can I follow this road?
My walls are closing in, losing control
When will I stop falling through this constant hole?
The room is spinning, can’t see straight
When will life become once again great?
The tears are falling, rolling down my cheek
When did I become so tired and weak?
I move my eyes, the image won’t follow
Why is the truth so hard to swallow?
Depression has taken over, I let it succeed
How do my eyes have tears left to bleed?
My head is throbbing with each heart beat
Why do I feel so incomplete?
My mind is tired, it begs me to rest
Why do I sense being possessed?
I want to scream, but the sound can’t exist
Why does my psyche want to resist?
All I want is to feel normal once more
Can I become what I was before?
Author notes
Written June 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Dark and Depressing...Please enter by XHollowXEyesX.
700 points, ended April 6, 2007, 119 entries
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wow....
I am actually speechless. this poem really hit home to me, you have no idea.
the whole write is written with such natural flow and raw emotion, I can really feel the pain bleeding through the words. YOu have alot of talent.
thanks for enterign and goodlcuk
keep your head up
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I'm glad we talked a little about this before I read it, Sara. Sometimes words are scary since they tell a story. But, in any respect, this is a good poem - you're doing so well in your writing, at least in this dad's opinion. Good job with a tough and very personal problem, daughter. You scared me so it must have been very "real" and full of good description.
Love ya,
Dad -
Great job
This is a great poem. I enjoyed reading it. You are a great writer and I can't wait to read more of your work. Good luck in my contest. Talk to you later. -
great poem!
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thank you so much for your commentand applaud, it truly made me smile and made my day...I'll have to take a look at your poetry in return.
sincerely,
Sara -
Great
This was what I would call DA BOMB . One of the best I have read since I joined!!! WRITE ON !!!
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