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Golden Angel

As night turns to day

I see the swords of man

Weilding wildly about

Slicing through the air

Slashing the flesh of man

Man killing man

Doing God's work

Judging without justification

Slaughtering humanity

Stomping the corruption

Grinding into the ground

The Devil's seeds

Seperating the good from the evil

Casting out the weak

Gathering the masses of strength

The hands of fate

Ruling the lands

The man of God arises

Bloodied canvas of grass

Beneath his feet

Good book in hand

Gripping his faith

Holding a silent vigil

For souls lost in battle

At his feet

One man's cry

To his side he kneels

Hand in hand

Together they pray

Opening heaven's gates

Stairways full

Rising slowly

Lifting tortured souls

From their earthbound hell

A golden winged angel

Guiding forth

A new existence

For all eternity

 

 

 

 

 

 




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Written June 24th, 2005

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  • Celticmoon
    October 28, 2005
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    Just another version of an age old story so many people tell so many different ways. In all honesty, I don't truly believe in the end of the world and all that jazz. This was simply a thought that came to me one night after a very long religious debate with some friends.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    October 28, 2005
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    Armagedon interesting concept I not sure where I stand here I guess on shaky ground but you told the story well
    Paul


  • Manic Poet
    August 12, 2005
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    hmm... an intresting way of putting the end of the world... this isnt how I picture it... I study the bible and all.... but it is cool anywho!
    Good write